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以下是我们本日的雅思真题:
Some groups of people benefit from modern communication technology, but some of them think that they do not benefit from these. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
思路剖析:
不可否认的是,当代的通讯技能为我们带来了许多便捷:互联网使得人们之间的互换不再受间隔的影响,获取信息的办法也更多样化。但是,其负面影响也不容忽略,网络成瘾和网络安全给我们带来很多麻烦,互换更方便了,可是人和人之间并没有变得更信赖。那么科技发展所带来的互换办法的改造究竟有利还是有害呢?
本文的不雅观点是:历史不能开倒车,不能因大失落小,科技的发展,通讯办法的变革是一定。我们应该充分利用便捷的通讯办法与他人互换,获取信息,同时也要充分意识到当代通讯科技给我们带来的危害。不要沉溺网络,把握现实生活和虚拟网络生活的差距;同时也戒备网络安全问题,不要轻信网上的陌生人,把稳保护自己的隐私。
One of the meaningful things that technology brings us, if not the most useful ones, is the modern ways of communication, including smart telephones, e-mails and different sorts of applications, all of which are based on the invention of the Internet.
首段明确当代的通讯手段究竟是什么,把听起来很抽象的词转为我们熟习的智能电话,手机运用和网络等。
参考译文:科技带来的故意义的事情包括当代的通讯办法,包括智好手机,电邮和各种手机运用,而所有的这一些都基于互联网。
No one could deny the fact that modern communicative technology has brought our life a lot of convenience that we could not even imagine in the past. People used to write letters, which take days even months to have them manually delivered, while nowadays the popularization of the Internet enables us to contact others in less than a second when in emergent circumstances.
此段谈论当代通讯办法的变革为我们带来的便捷。
参考译文:没有人能否认当代通讯办法带来的过去弗成思议的便捷。人们曾经写信,然后花数天到数月的韶光将信件传达,而互联网的遍及使我们在某些紧急状况下得以在不到一秒的韶光内联系到他人。
However, this does not imply that modern communicative technology is a mere bless. On the contrary, its negative effect such as Internet addiction and network security can hardly be ignored. There are countless examples that those who lack self-control, especially the adolescent, are indulged in cyber space, or worse, fail to distinguish between the virtual space and the reality. What concerns us more than addiction is the issues of network security. In the age of Internet, it is much more difficult to protect our personal information from strangers since that when registering or using a social website, we are more or less, consciously or unconsciously, forced to reveal some details relevant to ourselves. For example, the photos we upload may expose what we look like and the location we share tells where we are.
此段论述当代通讯办法的危害,以互联网为主。
参考译文:然而这并不虞味着当代通讯科技于人类而言就完备是福祉。相反,其负面影响难以忽略,例如网络成瘾和信息安全的问题。有数不清的缺少低廉甜头力的人——尤其是青少年沉迷网络,乃至更糟糕,难以区分虚拟韶光和现实。比起网络成瘾,信息安全的问题更令人担忧。在互联网时期,保护个人信息变得要难的多。由于当我们在注册或利用社交网页时,或多或少都会故意无意地透露个人信息。比如我们上传的照片可能会透露我们的长相,分享的定位会透露所处的位置。
Given the above discussion, I would draw the conclusion that although the development of modern communication technology is an irresistible tendency benefiting us a lot, we are required to be fully aware of its negative impact. It is advisable that we keep a reasonable distance with the cyber space and be alert not always to give the true private information in details.
末了一段在前面谈论的根本上提出要怎么在互联网时期好好利用网络。
经由以上论述我得出一个结论,只管当代通讯技能的发展是大势所趋,而且让我们受益非凡,但我们要充分意识到其负面影响。我们应该和网络保持理性的间隔,不要总是给出详细的真实信息。
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唐老雅
美国布朗大学富布赖特研究学者
中国学院派雅思代表人物
欧美文学有名学者
中国有名英语教诲专家
广东省翻译协会副会长
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