「高考提示作文」 55 Experiences on a Part-time Job

你是一名中学生。
假期里，自己有一段打工的经历。

1. keep on asking parents for money

2. learn the value of money

3. get along with others

4. get a little working and social experience

短文的开头已为你写好：

Nowadays it is not unusual for a student to find a part- time job. In the past winter holiday, I worked as a waiter at a McDonald’s

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“范文”

Nowadays① it is not unusual for a student to find a part-time job.② In the past winter holiday, I worked as a waiter at a McDonald’s③.

I used to④ keep on asking parents for money⑤. That was the first time that⑥ I had earned money, so I was quite excited. Now I can buy whatever I need without asking others for money. From my working experience, I find it’s good preparation for the world outside school. I have not only understood the value of money⑦ , but also learned how to get along with others⑧. What’s more, I’ve got a little working and social experience. It’s good for my future work . In a word, I’ve had a wonderful time.

“注释：”

①nowadays：现在，现今（常用于将现在的习气等与过去比较）

②a part- time job：一份业余事情

③at a MeDonald’s：在一家麦当劳餐厅

④used to do：过去常常做……

⑤keep on asking parents for money：一贯向父母要钱 （keep on doing：连续不断做某事 ；ask sb for sth: 向某人要某物）

⑥That’s the first time that……：that从句要用完成式

⑦the value of money：金钱的代价

⑧get along with others：与他人相处

⑨in a word：总之

“点评：”

这是一篇根据英语短语内容提示展开的议论性记叙文。
本文所磋商的是当今社会的一个热点话题：中学生参加暑假社会实践。

根据题目中所给的短语提示，作者把自己置身于个中，如身临其境，准确把握了内容之间的联系，把特定的人物在特定环境下的体会准确地表达出来了。

在文中，作者利用了比拟法，用“used to……”陈述了过去总是伸手向父亲要钱。
用now过渡到现在的情形，由于打工所得，现在不用再伸手要钱了。
由此，作者感触颇深。
从事情经历中自己不仅懂得了金钱的代价而且学会了与人相处，而且还得到了一点事情和社会履历。
末了，作者认为这对其将来有好处，这段经历让他很愉快。
这是作者自己添加的内容，对全文也是个很好的总结，适可而止。

文章的构造完全、紧凑，层次分明，语句畅通，过渡自然，要点全面，尤其值得大家把稳的是，作者采取了比拟法，过去与现在的比拟在时态上精确地得以表示。

资料来源：英语作文高分必背丛书：高考/李华田主编，武汉大学出版社，2005