8月17日雅思大年夜作文真题参考范文 | 孩子应该运用电子设备吗？

父母该当许可孩子利用电子设备吗？

More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

审题 & 解析

本题暗含了一个因果关系，即：由于利用电子设备可以帮助孩子学习利用新技能，以是父母许可孩子利用电子设备。
对付这类因果关系的题目，我们可以有几种思路，包括：

1. 承认缘故原由的合理性，也承认结果的合理性

2. 承认缘故原由的合理性，但否认结果，论证缘故原由不一定导致结果

3. 否认缘故原由，承认结果，论证导致这个结果另有其因

4. 否认缘故原由，否认结果

在实际写作中，一样平常的做法都是先承认缘故原由，然后批驳论证这个缘故原由与结果之间的逻辑关系。

就本题而言，我们可以先承认，该当让孩子们利用电子设备以帮助他们学习新技能（论述学习新技能的主要性），然后开始反转，论述这并不虞味着要许可孩子过度利用电子设备（由于这样会从身心两个方面对孩子产生不良影响）。

老师条记

第 1 段

Parents often struggle with decisions which involve their children’s technology access. While children must learn technology skills from playing on computers and tablets, there are potential risks to consider.

家长们常常为关于孩子们利用新技能的决定而苦恼。
虽然孩子们必须从电脑和平板电脑长进修技能技能，但也有潜在的风险须要考虑。

解析

（1） 本段直接引出孩子们利用新技能的话题，然后提出自己的不雅观点：孩子们该当通过利用电子设备来学习新技能，但也要考虑个中的风险。

（2） Struggle with… 为……而挣扎，为……而苦恼

（3） Access 利用；进入

（4） Potential risks 潜在的风险

第 2 段

Learning technology skills can benefit children for a variety of reasons. Firstly, exposing children to technology concepts early on prepares them for a future where they can remain productive, as more and more things will go online. Without adequate technology skills, children could hardly survive in the future world. Secondly, technology provides a source of educational entertainment for children playing on computers and tablets. E-learning has become so popular these days that it has become a very important part of children’s education. Finally, through technology, children have means to broaden their horizons like never before. For these reasons and more, parents are increasingly allowing their children to play on computers and tablets.

学习技能技能可以使儿童受益，缘故原由有很多。
首先，让孩子们尽早打仗到技能观点，为他们的未来做好准备，这样他们就可以保持活力，由于越来越多的事情将在网上进行。
如果没有足够的技能技能，儿童很难在未来的天下中生存。
其次，科技为在电脑和平板电脑上玩耍的孩子们供应了教诲娱乐的来源。
电子学习近年来非常盛行，已成为儿童教诲的主要组成部分。
末了，通过科技，孩子们有了前所未有的开阔视野的方法。
出于这些缘故原由，越来越多的家长许可他们的孩子玩电脑和平板电脑。

解析

（1） 本段论述该当让孩子们通过电子设备来学习新技能，由于新技能对付孩子们很主要：一、新技能让孩子们为未来做好准备；二、新技能可以帮助孩子们学习；三、新技能可以拓展孩子们的视野。

（2） A variety of… 多种多样的

（3） Expose…to… 把……暴露在……之下

（4） Early on 尽早地

（5） Productive 有生产力的；有活力的

（6） Adequate 足够的

（7） Broaden one’s horizons 开阔视野

第 3 段

However, over-using technology has a negative impact on children, both physically and mentally. For one thing, although playing on computers and tablets may promote new learning opportunities, it may also encourage less physical movement or a sedentary lifestyle. This can be seen in the rising number of children who have trouble with obesity. It is because spending too much time indoors in front of a screen increases the risk of weight gain. Mentally speaking, children who have more screen time are likely to have difficulty forming friendships and productive social networking. In their imagination, the world is shrinking as they begin to stop engaging in real-life, preferring the fantasy world offered by technology instead.

然而，过度利用技能对孩子的身心都有负面影响。
一方面，虽然在电脑和平板电脑上玩可能会促进新的学习机会，但它也可能鼓励较少的身体运动或久坐的生活办法。
这可以从越来越多的有肥胖问题的儿童中得到证明，这是由于在室内屏幕前呆太久会提高体重增加的风险。
从生理上讲，有更多屏幕韶光的孩子很可能难以建立友情和有效的社交网络。
当他们开始停滞融入现实生活时，在他们的想象中，天下正在缩小，转而更喜好技能供应的抱负天下。

解析

（1） 本段谈论过度利用电子产品对孩子的负面影响：身体方面和生理方面。

（2） A negative impact on… 对……的负面影响

（3） For one thing 其一

（4） A sedentary lifestyle 久坐的生活办法

（5） The rising number of… 越来越多的……

（6） Obesity 肥胖（症）

（7） To have difficulty doing… 做……有困难

（8） Engage in 从事；融入

（9） Fantasy world 抱负天下

第 4 段

In conclusion, the pros and cons of children using technology must all come down to moderation. Parents should realize that, for all the advantages, technological devices like computers and tablets can be harmful if they are overused.

总之，支持和反对孩子利用技能都必须适度。
家长们该当意识到，只管有很多优点，但电脑和平板电脑等技能设备如果过度利用，可能会造成危害。

解析

（1） 总结前文的紧张不雅观点，并提出自己的意见。

（2） Pros and cons 支持和反对

（3） Come down to moderation 走向适中

（4） For all the advantages只管有这些优点

7分范文

Parents often struggle with decisions which involve their children’s technology access. While children must learn technology skills from playing on computers and tablets, there are potential risks to consider.

Learning technology skills can benefit children for a variety of reasons. Firstly, exposing children to technology concepts early on prepares them for a future where they can remain productive, as more and more things will go online. Without adequate technology skills, children could hardly survive in the future world. Secondly, technology provides a source of educational entertainment for children playing on computers and tablets. E-learning has become so popular these days that it has become a very important part of children’s education. Finally, through technology, children have means to broaden their horizons like never before. For these reasons and more, parents are increasingly allowing their children to play on computers and tablets.

However, over-using technology has a negative impact on children, both physically and mentally. For one thing, although playing on computers and tablets may promote new learning opportunities, it may also encourage less physical movement or a sedentary lifestyle. This can be seen in the rising number of children who have trouble with obesity. It is because spending too much time indoors in front of a screen increases the risk of weight gain. Mentally speaking, children who have more screen time are likely to have difficulty forming friendships and productive social networking. In their imagination, the world is shrinking as they begin to stop engaging in real-life, preferring the fantasy world offered by technology instead.

In conclusion, the pros and cons of children using technology must all come down to moderation. Parents should realize that, for all the advantages, technological devices like computers and tablets can be harmful if they are overused.

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建议背诵的句子

1. Firstly, exposing children to technology concepts early on prepares them for a future where they can remain productive, as more and more things will go online

首先，让孩子们尽早打仗到技能观点，为他们的未来做好准备，这样他们就可以保持活力，由于越来越多的事情将在网上进行。

2. E-learning has become so popular these days that it has become a very important part of children’s education.

电子学习近年来非常盛行，已成为儿童教诲的主要组成部分。

3. For one thing, although playing on computers and tablets may promote new learning opportunities, it may also encourage less physical movement or a sedentary lifestyle.

一方面，虽然在电脑和平板电脑上玩可能会促进新的学习机会，但它也可能鼓励较少的身体运动或久坐的生活办法。

4. Mentally speaking, children who have more screen time are likely to have difficulty forming friendships and productive social networking.

从生理上讲，有更多屏幕韶光的孩子很可能难以建立友情和有效的社交网络。

5. Parents should realize that, for all the advantages, technological devices like computers and tablets can be harmful if they are overused.

家长们该当意识到，只管有很多优点，但电脑和平板电脑等技能设备如果过度利用，可能会造成危害。